Character Creation Thread (Clarion Quietus)

[Johanas]

Welcome aboard to the two of you. I'll be sure to mention to King Blanket that I speak Black Tongue early, so at least someone in the group can speak to him. Although if I recall correctly, over half the party should speak it.

[Le Noir Faineant]

Alas, here we go:

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King Blanket

Representing "Le Noir Faineant"
Campaign "Claron Quietus"

Male Ogre Barbarian 1
Age Unknown
9'; 950 lbs.
Body cast: Marvel Comic's The Abomination


Max HP: 59
AP (Lifetime): 5

Str: 22 +6
Dex: 8 -1
Con: 15 +2
Int: 6 -2
Wis: 11 +0
Cha: 11 +0


Speed: 30 ft.
Initiative: -1
BAB: +4
Melee : +8
Ranged: -2
CMB: +11
CMD: +20

Damn big club +11; 2d6+11
Stone Axe2d6

AC: 21; Touch 13, Flat 21.

Saves:
Fort: +8/+10; Reflex 0; Will +1/+3

Abilities:
Barbarian Rage, Darvision, Low Light Vision

Feats:
Breaker; Wild Rager;  Climb; Toughness; Perception; Power Attack, Cleave   

Traits:
Suspicious (+ 1 on sense motive checks)

Skills:
Acrobatics -2, Appraise -2, Climb +16, Escape Artist -2, Knowledge (All) -2, Sense Motive +1,              Stealth -5, Survival +1, Swim +6.

Languages:
Black Tongue

Gear:
Damn big club (+4), Padded armor, Ogre clothes (rags), Ogre rations x 5, Stone axe, Flint and steel, Bag made of human skin, bed blanket,  favorite blanket “Dylan”.

[Le Noir Faineant]

Thoughts, and corrections are highly appreciated. This was a bitch to stat.

Also, no way I am letting go of that blanket.

[Doomed Hero]

Well, finally getting to this, here's my observations-

It looks like you copy-pasted Mandag's sheet and replaced his numbers with your own, which is a great way of doing things, but has left a couple discrepancies.

it looks like your bodycast link takes you to Thomas Jane. You'll need to imbed a new url.

To make it easier for me to check your math, can you please give me a breakdown of where various numbers come from, especially for attacks and skills? Simply putting numbers and their sources in parenthesis will work. Take a look at Mandag's sheet for his math breakdowns next to his totals. That's what I'm looking for.

Over all it looks good, I just need some help with where your numbers come from.

[Le Noir Faineant]

Okay, thought that might honestly take a week or two. Doing the charsheet in this format was a bitch,
and truth to be told, I have not saved the intermittent stages of character creation.
I just don't have that spare hour right now, sorry.

Basically, I took all of your criticism and worked it in, staying pretty much to what you wrote above my own interpretations.


Also, since I was supposed to already chime into game action, is it that simply nothing has been going over the holidays,
or am I the dumbass who missed his thread? O.O

Anyway, part of the Midnight stuff I impulsively ordered arrived already. Good reads for RPG material!

[Doomed Hero]

The game books are really rich. I'm glad you're enjoying them. Keep in mind that I've made a few minor changes to the setting, so if you find discrepancies with my descriptions vs. what you've read, that's probably why (feel free to ask though)

Basically I just want the number's sources next to the totals. Take your time. You've got about a month before I anticipate combat.

As for the thread, you made your introduction in the OOC thread. I assumed you were just waiting for the right time. (I'd prefer you wait for Marakal to address you, but he seems to be absent, so feel free just to jump in). Your In Game thread is the Quietus Clarion IC thread. Feel free to stir up a situation if you want to. You are an ogre after all.

[Le Noir Faineant]

I'll wait until Sunday if somebody among the party members calls me out, and if not, I'll simply chime in. Ogre-style.
Hide yo children, hide yo farm animals! 'Cause now, there's somebody out there who EATS everybody.